Mrs. Stewart, For the movie review, the person who corrected my paper gave me five points for every section (A-D). The only correction they made was one dead word and it was "really". I used it in a sentences that says "I really liked...." should I just type up the paper like i wrote it? should i look for mistakes? should I change the sentence to "i very much liked ...." Thank You, Bella 7th grade
I flew through the forest faster than a tiger, We flew zigzag better then a screaming toddler, All of us tweeted in the trees louder than a man and a woman arguing, Our group dove from the trees like diving from a diving board, I open my wings like a woman in an opera, Then I let wind the rest like a fan lifting a paper plane, Some slatted on the ground like a person falling off a cliff, The rest and I went off like a person running for a race, I went on south with my friends as a group pushing into get the front seat.
Mrs. Stewart,
ReplyDeleteFor the movie review, the person who corrected my paper gave me five points for every section (A-D). The only correction they made was one dead word and it was "really". I used it in a sentences that says "I really liked...." should I just type up the paper like i wrote it? should i look for mistakes? should I change the sentence to "i very much liked ...."
Thank You,
Bella 7th grade
Joshua Esteva
ReplyDelete3/16/12
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I flew through the forest faster than a tiger,
We flew zigzag better then a screaming toddler,
All of us tweeted in the trees louder than a man and a woman arguing,
Our group dove from the trees like diving from a diving board,
I open my wings like a woman in an opera,
Then I let wind the rest like a fan lifting a paper plane,
Some slatted on the ground like a person falling off a cliff,
The rest and I went off like a person running for a race,
I went on south with my friends as a group pushing into get the front seat.
Please print Mrs. stewert